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A song, a smile and she
opened her heart,
only to have it snatched by
a dark raven intent on a steal.
Why, oh why?
The hollow hurts where once
there was harmony
with a clenched fist.
-Gerry@Strummed Words
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| photo by TheFoxAndTheRaven |
A song, a smile and she
opened her heart,
only to have it snatched by
a dark raven intent on a steal.
Why, oh why?
The hollow hurts where once
there was harmony
with a clenched fist.
-Gerry@Strummed Words
12 comments:
"The hollow hurts where once
there was harmony" - nice
wrote from a similar tack
the hollow is a painful place to be found
ughh
I mistyped in the URL
Ladysknight
Succinct with sad embers. Nice.
I like your ravenly take...
Oh, dear. It does hurt. Wonderfully penned.
so many times we 'open our heart' for it to be stolen...nicely worded.
so many times we 'open our heart' for it to be stolen...nicely worded.
so many times we 'open our heart' for it to be stolen...nicely worded.
so many times we 'open our heart' for it to be stolen...nicely worded.
so many times we 'open our heart' for it to be stolen...nicely worded.
I have no idea why my response came up so many times - I sincerely apologise!
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