Monday, June 1, 2015

MagpieTales: Afloat Senryu

photo by Toni Frissell
Afloat or dreaming
With arms not touching ground, earth.
Worlds above drift by

© Gerry at Strummed Words

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14 comments:

Vandana Sharma said...

and she floats as the world goes by...............

Strummed Words said...

A good or not good thing, Vandana?

Kathe W. said...

floating is wonderous

Berowne said...

Excellent mood-creation in response to the prompt...

Harvee said...

Thank you, Berowne!

Harvee said...

Sometimes, we don't want to come back to earth!

Helena said...

They certainly do. Fine prompt piece!

Harvee said...

Glad you enjoyed it, Helena!

Theresa Milstein said...

Such a striking haiku!

Strummed Words said...

Thanks, Theresa.

Tess Kincaid said...

Love the notion of drifting words...

Strummed Words said...

Worlds of reality and of the imagination....

Michael said...

so far above it seems

Strummed Words said...

Perhaps....

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