Sunday, February 24, 2013

Magpie Tales: All My Secrets


All My Secrets

My mind, my heart,
my gut responses, my breath,
even my angled knee.

All you want to know
is here, half hidden,
though I had hoped to shelter

inner parts of myself covered
in marble, white and cold.
But you can find my essence

with a pull on soft handles
that reveal all in parts.


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11 comments:

Harvee said...

I do like the take on this one, if I do say so myself...

Heidi said...

"soft handles that pull me apart" I love that line. I can almost feel it. Really lovely use of the prompt.

Laurie Kolp said...

I agree with Heidi.

izzy said...

This is great ! you caught it well-
thanks!

Jinksy said...

All you want to know
is here, half hidden

And you brought it to light most ably!

anthonynorth said...

You certainly came to grips with the subject there. Excellent.

Kathe W. said...

well handled...well written!

Yvonne Osborne said...

Nicely done. I love the last two lines.

21 Wits said...

Sweetness in all directions.

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Rich with promise...

Anna :o]

Tess Kincaid said...

Lovely...yes those soft handles...smile...

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