All My Secrets
My mind, my heart,
my gut responses, my breath,
even my angled knee.
All you want to know
is here, half hidden,
though I had hoped to shelter
inner parts of myself covered
in marble, white and cold.
But you can find my essence
with a pull on soft handles
that reveal all in parts.
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11 comments:
I do like the take on this one, if I do say so myself...
"soft handles that pull me apart" I love that line. I can almost feel it. Really lovely use of the prompt.
I agree with Heidi.
This is great ! you caught it well-
thanks!
All you want to know
is here, half hidden
And you brought it to light most ably!
You certainly came to grips with the subject there. Excellent.
well handled...well written!
Nicely done. I love the last two lines.
Sweetness in all directions.
Rich with promise...
Anna :o]
Lovely...yes those soft handles...smile...
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