Sunday, July 21, 2013

Immortal

painting by Andrew Wyeth 


A god, a thing of marble and stone,
wants to raise leg  and thigh over the seat
of the monster machine with its eye
like a moon piercing the night.
But he fears flesh, terror, a rush of
blood to brain and fever to brow.

Which immortal seeks to become a man
even for just a moment of speed,
high feelings, a chase on a thing of metal
and steel? When he can stand
forever stonelike and invincible,
standing tall over the land?


- Gerry @ Strummed Words

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8 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love the idea of a god fearing flesh.

Tess Kincaid said...

Love the textures here...nice write...

Magaly Guerrero said...

It brings to mind the Emo undead... always wanting to be just human, for the pleasure of feeling something...

Berowne said...

You've written something grand and rather moving...

Helen said...

This feels majestic ... I enjoyed it.

Trellissimo said...

Nicely contrasts mobility and its opposite.

kaykuala said...

When he can stand
forever stonelike and invincible,
standing tall over the land

A man with good intentions will often succeed no doubt about it!

Hank

Anonymous said...

Fantastic =)

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